The three heroes came together and defeated all evil.
There bodies were destroyed,but there souls remained...
They forever remained in the ancient gems.
For all eternity,they would stay.
We took care of the gems even more than before,
If not to keep the power,then to keep those good souls.
Amazing tale, but please watch your spelling. I believe Sapphire has 2 p's and you need to watch homophones there, their and they're. I love the suspense and intensity of your writing. You have an amazing imagination. I bet you see all three of the heroes clearly in your mind. They remind me a bit of the Hunger Games characters--as they each have things they are known for. What are some things they might say that would match their strengths?
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